Sunday, October 9, 2011

Identity

Identity is all of those characteristic which a person is known to be. People all have different identity and nobody could live without identity. Identity effect many people’s life and it also related to how people feel and how they express their feeling.

In middle school, identity is very important. Many people are not sure of who they wanted to be because sometime when other people or their friend have something new you wanted to change your self. In middle school to feel comfortable socially and academically. In the first quarter of school years we learn many things about identity and how it effect your identity. Making a movie about who you are is one of the project we did about identity. I have learn that my name also reflected on who I am.  Sometime in middle school people wanted to be like others, but it just impossible because it's hard to change your identity, so we have to be proud of you we are.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Rita
    your writing was excellent it had everything you needed but it was didn't have much details so i would give it a 3

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  2. Hey Rita, your entry is good. It has some information, but there could be more you can write. In your paragraphs you still have some grammar mistakes so i would give you a 3.

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